tbritz13
2/8/2018
I think this novelette deserves a 3.8 stars. There was things I liked, such as the humor. However the main Character Shous Jedea, an agent of some kind for his government, seems to ba an all-round superhero with a glib way of acting and talking. He breaks a woman's arms and yet she walks with him apparently unfazed and guides him to the cell block to rescue an old friend of Jedea's. Juts way too many improbable things happen in a short space of time, for this to be a compelling read.
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