The Dark House

I liked the idea, and that's a plus considering I'm not usually into haunted houses. The problem I have is Dark House had a weak conclusion, and good endings are a NEED for a short story. It's too short to end without a bang. I have an ending myself that I think would have worked better. but I'm not a published author. It was instead a gimmick that didn't turn out well. Wise did write some creepy prose but it wasn't enough for me. I think this will go down as forgettable.