Thomcat
10/4/2013
A good beginning and a situation that makes you think - what if people were given free license to discriminate against someone? Would they come out of the woodwork, happy to disrespect a human being legally? No, I don't think this is where the author was going, but it made me think. Then things devolved into cartoon violence. Certain aspects were unbelievable, and others were inevitable. The main character's primary aspect is that he's good - at least if he reminds himself that he is. I more or less liked the ending - just the middle parts that needed some work.